What do you think about the verse i just wrote?

comin straight out the dirty south you should know that we dont play around so why tha fucckk you runnin ya mouth? too late to apoligize, tired of all your lies, now look into my eyes and you bound to be conserned for you and your wife's lives, yeah you bout to get hurt, burned, fucckkiin berried in tha dirt, now ya lessons learned